Ami's Stripe
Poems and Stories
8/10 Very calm and romantic design but the writing is very turbulent.
Your poems are great and your openly wishful desire to understand life and yourself is admairable.
There is nothing wrong with your life but your perspective on life is confusing, which is quite normal for all of us.
There are no given solution for your multiple questions on life, love and your friends because life is all it is, love is all you might find one day and friends are just your personal choice.
The life itself is also your choice and nobody elses.
I would only take liberty to tell you what I noted on your blog. You are concentrating all your effort on very small things but seeing throught your poems and writngs I can assure you - you have talent for bigger picture.
When someone was given talent he or she must take great responsibility to cherish it and share it with the world. The world is big and leaves by the measures of the big issues : liberty, slavory, wars, disasters, hunger and so on.
I would like to give you just one perspective to reflect and dwell upon- the everyday fact of our world. Everyday there are 30,000 people dying because they do not have assess to even one drop of water and they have no choice compare to you.
You, on the other hand have many choices, at list three that you are constantly writing about on your blog- love, friends and life and therefore you are so blessed to exercice them as you wish.
I had also notice that you have ability to become a great thinker if you wish but again, take in consideration that great thinkers think big picture.
Nevetherless, I love your very emotional style of writing and I only hope that you will take a minute and reflect on my comment.
My warmets regards,
Elena Ornig
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Skmamun says 216 days ago
Such a wonderful blog.