Critique of The Sky Throne By Shelley Watters
― I was honored to have Shelley Watters critique my pitch and first 150 words for The Sky Throne. Here are her comments: ∙ Name: Christopher S. Ledbetter ∙ Title: The Sky Throne ∙ Genre: YA Fantasy ∙ Word count: 85,200 ∙ Pitch: In order to become powerful enough to avenge an attack on his family, Zeus must access the power of The Sky Throne. But, doing so might kill him in the process. ∙ Shelley's Comments: Great, powerful pitch here. ∙ Excerpt: [...].
