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Game Time! Let's write a story together...
Healthit up for YOU says 572 days ago
We are all writers... so let's see what we can create together!
Ok the rules are this: I will start the story, and each of you will continue where the last person left off, using the last word they stopped with.
Ok the rules are this: I will start the story, and each of you will continue where the last person left off, using the last word they stopped with.
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Odliam says 572 days ago
...to go to the window, the soft snow that fell from a forbidding sky spread a milky curtain on the field. The noise that awoke me...
Moonomo says 572 days ago
..me- usually I sleep like a log, my musical clock awake me and my days began- that noise...
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Healthit Up For YOU says 572 days ago
me was somewhat peculiar and I could see nothing from my window except for the white beauty that had me completely mesmerized until...
Moonomo says 572 days ago
hahaha- I was about to merging both post afterward- you did already. Good job.
Healthit Up For YOU says 572 days ago
that noise was somewhat peculiar and I could see nothing from my window except for the white beauty that had me completely mesmerized until.......
Moonomo says 572 days ago
..until- can't believe! What's happening? Lightning flushed the sky and it becomes completely dark! Pitch-dark. Stone-silence! Nothing to see, nothing to feel...
Odliam says 572 days ago
to feel... except that creeping tingle in my nervous system. Is the world ending as all those predictions state?...
Ravali says 572 days ago
then i turned around and saw that it's just my bed shaking due to the storm outside and just woke up and walked through my room door....
Odliam says 572 days ago
into the bathroom, a white light illuminated the room from above, in the mirror hanging from the wall there was...
SaifZahid says 572 days ago
.....I was stunned by the view out side,my feet became heavy stone seeing that there was...
Healthit Up For YOU says 572 days ago
who it was that was looking at me, as if they needed me? Could this be the noise that awoke me? As my curiosity arose, I found myself being drawn...
Jonnie Boi says 572 days ago
drawn, by some power, some unknown force, right out of my clothes and through the window...
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Odliam says 572 days ago
letting snow bite my skin while I walked naked and blindly toward that presence with green cat's eyes and bloody mouth open to...
Melissa says 572 days ago
to consume as if I was its next meal. The fear inside me started to rise, but I pushed it down as I ventured further towards the unknown...
Odliam says 572 days ago
...fate that awaited me, suddenly the hard green eyes resolved into two small lights on the roof of a police car that...
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Jayme says 572 days ago
that...had a siren that was roaring in my ears. My skin was turning a brilliant pink from the biteing cold, and as i lie there naked looking threw that brilliant white with the siren blareing louder and the police officer geting near i whispered to no one in particular...
Odliam says 572 days ago
"Himmeldonnerwetter" the long German word that my Granddad used to mumble every time he was in trouble, and certainly I was now, because...
Jolly Princess says 572 days ago
.. because I know the time is close by. it a matter of timing… someone is ready to meet me... I know…
Odliam says 572 days ago
I know... I feel it in my bones, the knowledge reverberated in the hollow of my mind, it is now or never, the steps grew closer and...
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Jolly Princess says 572 days ago
… and who knows what awaits me. The clock is ticking slowly… Do I have to let go of the scream.. I’ve been holding inside of me?
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Odliam says 572 days ago
Do I? I opened my mouth to howl to the absent moon but a gag was inserted in my mouth so hard I almost swallow it, fighting tears of pain and fear I...
Melissa says 572 days ago
suddenly a noise was heard from the dark bushes nearby. The mystery man turned his head so quickly I almost didn't see the motion. I stood there, paralyzed with fear as my brain screamed for me to run as fast as I could. I needed to get away from this man...
Mayaa says 572 days ago
but my feet n hands were tyd up and i cudnt move!..i lie there wshn 4 a miracle 2 happn...
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Beanizer says 572 days ago
..to happen in just a blink of an eye..but nothing happened..i struggled to get out of my numb body..i was chasing my breath..i pushed my cold feet..pushed it hard..until..until..a not-so-good smell with an undesirable sound broke the silence..
the stranger stared at me..i can't read his reaction..his eyes were so fierce..then he asked me "did you just fart? you got no manners!!"
covering his nose, he run as swift as the flash..my eyes couldn't reach him..
i found myself alone again..i looked around
the stranger stared at me..i can't read his reaction..his eyes were so fierce..then he asked me "did you just fart? you got no manners!!"
covering his nose, he run as swift as the flash..my eyes couldn't reach him..
i found myself alone again..i looked around
Nandita says 571 days ago
I lookd around and saw dat no one ws around me....
I thot..."dis is my chance"...i tried hard to run away ...but...i cudnt..
den i startd rollng down in da grass....thinkng of hiding sumwer...i saw a ....
I thot..."dis is my chance"...i tried hard to run away ...but...i cudnt..
den i startd rollng down in da grass....thinkng of hiding sumwer...i saw a ....
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Jayme says 571 days ago
a... rabit hopping across the cold frozen lawn and wished i was a rabbit. i had lost feeling in my arms and then my legs, the numbness slowly creeping through my body. when a warm set of gentle hands picked me up. my long blonde hair was covered in snow, as i lay my head against his chest, for he had picked me up. i tilted my head back to get a look at my warm savior and...
Ravali says 571 days ago
i saw a wonderful prince who is so handsome and he signalled me to walk with him and showed me the way...
Jayme says 571 days ago
way...to a carrige. it had big clides dale horses and a person holding the door open. the prince gave me his cape and as i wraped it around me, he pulled me closer in to his arms. the carrige had a heater in it, how wonderful i thought. as i turned my head...
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
head and knew at that moment I was making a life long decision. Should I leave? Leave everything, and go with this prince? Then I suddenly remembered....
Jayme says 571 days ago
remembered... that i just woke up alone and terrified, and got almost attacked. i had nothing to leave behind. would i really care if i lived in a castle with a prince who would love me? so i...
Jonnie Boi says 571 days ago
I had nothing behind me. There stood nothing in my way. Leaving with this prince would be an easy decision to make. So I made the decision and I decided to stay with this prince in this warm carriage, hoping for a home filled with warmth and laughter and love. God, how I wished for...
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Jayme says 571 days ago
for... that. i woke up with sudden alarm. i was still in the carrige, i must have fallen asleep. the prince was not there however, so i looked through the clear window and saw him out side kissing another maiden! feeling my dreams chatter and a single warm tear run down my still cold cheek, i curled up in a ball and...
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
and could not think of anything else but the warmth I felt. I was so content, and felt this extreme sense of love... I did not know where this carriage was taking me, but did want this moment to last forever....
Jayme says 571 days ago
****(doctors point of view)
"FOREVER" she was screaming over and over. people in the insane isilem are going to make me crazy one of these days i thought. i walked over and gently pushed the needle through her arm. as soon as i did...
"FOREVER" she was screaming over and over. people in the insane isilem are going to make me crazy one of these days i thought. i walked over and gently pushed the needle through her arm. as soon as i did...
Moonomo says 571 days ago
..my life I just left behind started to show up in front of me.
I'm ordinary...
I'm ordinary...
Moonomo says 571 days ago
[ops- little correction to keep up]
..her life she just left behind started to show up in front of me.
She's a ordinary...
..her life she just left behind started to show up in front of me.
She's a ordinary...
Jill Wellington says 571 days ago
I hate to upset the flow of this amazing prose...but I am LMAO at Beanie's contribution!!
continue onward...
continue onward...
Jonnie Boi says 571 days ago
powerful young girl. How did she get mixed up in this place? 'I shouldn't be looking at her this way,' I thought to myself. But I couldn't help myself. I stood and stared at her...
Melissa says 571 days ago
at her while she started to calm down. Tears fell down her cheeks and my heart started to break. Her mouth continued to move but no words came out. It was like she needed something....
Jayme says 571 days ago
something... like a kiss i thought inward. stop! i thought, shes crazy not normal! as i thought this she fell into my arms. she was so light and it felt as if she fit perfectly! i couldn't help but...
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Beanizer says 571 days ago
but keep her closer to my chest until she can hear the beating of my restless heart..suddenly i felt her hands..creeping inside my..pocket..and she said "Can i borrow your hanky?" ..i was stunned..stunned seeing her face..her nose made a bubble..then i wiped her nose with my hanky..i felt a 'lil disgust but i can't stop admiring her beautiful eyes..i said to her "You can have my hanky honey, no need to return it"..then she smiled..that smile melted me inside..
Melissa says 571 days ago
a figure raced in front of me, blocking my path. My heart raced as I tried to scurry away from whoever it was. Large hands grabbed my shoulders roughly as a gruff voice said in my ear, "I know everything about you. I know what you've done." Surprised, I said...
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
I said, "Who are you, and what do you want from me?" As I hesitated to turn around to see who this might be, I feared the person with the green cat eyes! Strangely, I felt no fear at all when I turned around to see...
Melissa says 571 days ago
to see the ordinary and beautiful woman from the hospital. She stood there in her white gown, the moonlight shining around her. My mouth went dry as she came closer to me. My eyes went down to her hands balled up in fists. She reached forward and handed me a piece of paper. I opened it with trembling hands and read....
Jolly Princess says 571 days ago
...read until I came to realize it was a will. Stating all the properties and who should they go to. As a ran my fingers page after page I came to a portion that struck me with awe...
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
....with awe it said, " Please finish my life". As I looked up to ask her what do you mean, it was as if I became paralyzed and could not say a thing. She walked away.....
Melissa says 571 days ago
away, leaving me with a knot in my stomach. Goosebumps formed on my skin even though it wasn't a cold night. My thoughts began to race and I decided to chase after her, demanding to know what she meant. I can't do such a thing, I screamed at her. I could never. She looked up at me with those sad eyes of hers and lifted a hand to touch my face...
Beanizer says 571 days ago
Away from me..but she was too slow..since i can't move a my feet from the ground, i tried to reach her through my hand..at last i was able to hold her..her hair..she struggled to get away from me.. said unto her:
"you can only go if you put my name on your last will..you have wasted enough of my time and tried to freak me out here and you got the guts to walk away without answering me!!..say something!!!"
she stared at me, then made sign language..damn! she's having a sore throat and cant talk..so i have no choice but to slap her face..then she cried..
"you can only go if you put my name on your last will..you have wasted enough of my time and tried to freak me out here and you got the guts to walk away without answering me!!..say something!!!"
she stared at me, then made sign language..damn! she's having a sore throat and cant talk..so i have no choice but to slap her face..then she cried..
Beanizer says 571 days ago
oooops!! melissa answered first..
ok healthit, let me continue my last line..
then she cried..and so i panicked..
then i said "sorry, got carried away"..
then she gave me a wide evil grin..hmmmm..so i slap her again..
then she cried so loud this time..
she looked crazy..it freaked me out..so i ran towards the house afraid the cops will haunt me..
ok healthit, let me continue my last line..
then she cried..and so i panicked..
then i said "sorry, got carried away"..
then she gave me a wide evil grin..hmmmm..so i slap her again..
then she cried so loud this time..
she looked crazy..it freaked me out..so i ran towards the house afraid the cops will haunt me..
Mayaa says 571 days ago
she cried....and i did not know what to do so i hugged her and patted her head....i waited for her to stop crying so that i can have an explanation or atleast my name on that will....
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
cried.. and I suddenly came to my senses and realized I could never do that to her! Her eyes were always hypnotizing.. always needing something, but never knowing what it is..
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
Whoops we posted at same time (sorry)
on that will. Her eyes were always hypnotizing... always needing something, but never knowing what it is. Then suddenly she was gone, and I decided back on my journey home..
on that will. Her eyes were always hypnotizing... always needing something, but never knowing what it is. Then suddenly she was gone, and I decided back on my journey home..
Beanizer says 571 days ago
hahhaha!! i posted at the same time..but we had the same endng somehow..towards home..
Mayaa says 571 days ago
what it is....i stood gazing at her...wondering what she needed she was no angel but her innocence and that sadness that sadness in her eyes touched me....and i felt bad that i slappd her...
Mayaa says 571 days ago
no healthit can you or someone else start it?...i am completely lost as to what write now..
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
on that will. Her eyes were always hypnotizing... always needing something, but never knowing what it is. Then suddenly she was gone, and I decided back on my journey home..When suddenly...
Mayaa says 571 days ago
i heard a shriek...i turned around what happened...the carriage had stopped at somewhere in a forest...so i raced through the forest searching for her...when..
Mayaa says 571 days ago
(oops sorry for my mistake.the sentence is-"i turned around to see what happened."
Mayaa says 571 days ago
i wonder "what is happening here?"and then i see something moving near my legs when i bend down i see its just a small rat and heave a sigh of relief...but i start searching for her for i believe that thse shriek was from her...it becomes hard for me to move through the forest as the rain starts pouring down heavily...
Healthit Up For YOU says 571 days ago
I suddenly realize I am lost! My heart starts pounding as I shiver from the sudden chill of the rain when...
Anum Rashid says 571 days ago
when i saw red liquid coming from my washroom.it was very scaring but..............
Beanizer says 571 days ago
when i heard a voice..
"what are you doing here?"
i looked around..no one was there except for the big beautiful owl with sunglasses..i drew near him..i was amazed and i talked to him
"It's raining, why are you wearing those glasses?"..
it answered back: "A disturbing light a while ago passed by, it almost blinded me, now i'm being cautious.."
The weird bird flew off before i could ask another question..My knees are trembling now..a lightning struck a big tree..under the tree i saw..
"what are you doing here?"
i looked around..no one was there except for the big beautiful owl with sunglasses..i drew near him..i was amazed and i talked to him
"It's raining, why are you wearing those glasses?"..
it answered back: "A disturbing light a while ago passed by, it almost blinded me, now i'm being cautious.."
The weird bird flew off before i could ask another question..My knees are trembling now..a lightning struck a big tree..under the tree i saw..
Beanizer says 571 days ago
her face was blank..
i felt how the coldness entered my body..my body weakened, my bones softened..before i hit the ground, the blank face lady catch me in her arms..
i heard her saying..
"wake up wake up..i was just joking..it's just a wig..i'm bald and you're looking at the back of my head..wake up"..
i came back to my full consciousness..she smiled at me..should i smile back??
i felt how the coldness entered my body..my body weakened, my bones softened..before i hit the ground, the blank face lady catch me in her arms..
i heard her saying..
"wake up wake up..i was just joking..it's just a wig..i'm bald and you're looking at the back of my head..wake up"..
i came back to my full consciousness..she smiled at me..should i smile back??
Mayaa says 571 days ago
this time it was my sister who opended the door...a beautiful young lady soakde from top to bottom n the rain came inside her hands trembling from the cold and said"i was on my way to a party but its raining and i losstt m-my w-ww-way"she stammered as she spoke....and if my sister wasnt holding her i was sure that she would have fallen down...she looked so weak and pale...
Mayaa says 571 days ago
we kept wondering and finally we lifted her and placed her on our couch...i went into the kitchen to get her a glass of water while my sister turned on the heatr and started fetching for a rug to keep her warm...but by the time we returned back to the couch she was...
Ravali says 570 days ago
she was dead and it's really a big shock to all of us and my hands started trembling on seeing her pale face...
Healthit Up For YOU says 570 days ago
face.. Suddenly I hear someone yelling my name... and its my co worker at the hospital yelling we need you in room 210! That lady is gone, come to room 210....
Melissa says 570 days ago
her pale face as memories came rushing back at me. I could hear a woman's voice laughing and calling my name. Afraid, I turned my head to look around the room, but only saw my sister standing there, crying. I had never felt more hopeless as the door opened and...
Healthit Up For YOU says 570 days ago
as the door opened and suddenly I heard someone yelling my name, it is my co worker at the hospital saying we need you in room 210! That lady is gone, we need you in room 210! Puzzeled I looked around saw the family in mourning, and left the room...
Jonnie Boi says 570 days ago
(changing perspectives)
"Dr. Roberts, you say the girl left 210, but none of this other stuff makes sense," the psychiatrist asked the young man. Dr. Reins, the psychiatrist, had been called in after Dr. Roberts lost a patient in his ward. Many assumed he made the young girl up, even her condition, and her stories about a green-eyed cat person. "I think we should close here. I want you to really go back and think about what happened to that young girl. But I also need you to remember how you got to that point."
As Dr. Roberts was carried off by a few muscular orderlies, Dr. Reins sat at her computer rubbing her eyes. She was so tired. Dr. Roberts had been a troubling patient to work with. She wondered what to do with him.
"I can't give up on him," she said to herself.
"Dr. Roberts, you say the girl left 210, but none of this other stuff makes sense," the psychiatrist asked the young man. Dr. Reins, the psychiatrist, had been called in after Dr. Roberts lost a patient in his ward. Many assumed he made the young girl up, even her condition, and her stories about a green-eyed cat person. "I think we should close here. I want you to really go back and think about what happened to that young girl. But I also need you to remember how you got to that point."
As Dr. Roberts was carried off by a few muscular orderlies, Dr. Reins sat at her computer rubbing her eyes. She was so tired. Dr. Roberts had been a troubling patient to work with. She wondered what to do with him.
"I can't give up on him," she said to herself.
Psyfa says 570 days ago
As she sat at her desk she couldn’t help feeling a deep sadness tugging at her heart and weighing on her soul.
Mayaa says 570 days ago
she stood up and started pacing up and down in the room wondering what to do...
Melissa says 570 days ago
The phone on her desk start to ring. She hurried to pick it. As she listened to the voice on the other end, her heart felt like it jumped into her throat. "Yes," she said. "I understand completely. He just needs more work. Give me more time." Her plea rang in her own ears as she put down the phone, feeling more numb than ever...
Healthit Up For YOU says 570 days ago
she laid her head down and closed her eyes and suddenly heard a soft whisper...
Lancey says 570 days ago
soft whisper of her name calling her to the ward room.The whisper said help help help me please! The cold wind blew the curtains and the leaves where falling outside the window.The clock stops clicking it was past midnight.The phone rang three times and came a loud sound from the----
Melissa says 570 days ago
dark corner of the room. She tiptoed quietly to the spot, finding herself strangely afraid of what might be there. Once she got closer, she saw a woman standing there wearing a white gown. The woman smiled and held out a pale white hand. The doctor's blood ran cold as the strange woman whispered, "Dr. Roberts. I need him."
Jayme says 570 days ago
him."... she murmurmed. i ran screming down the coridoor. so he was right she fits the discruption exactly! i kept seeing her pale face and that expression. what could it have been? the expression looked as if...
Jolly Princess says 570 days ago
If only I could go back and see what is happening in the real world .. but how? I see shadow.. yes.. a shadow. At first it was kind of a hunk. As the shadow comes closer… and closer … he has something in his hand.. it’s something white … and bulky. As he comes closer … I realized it was ... a wet diapy :)
Jolly Princess says 567 days ago
@ Beanizer - I thought it was fun to use your diapy here. (lol) Renella is so smart to pick up the word without breaking the chain.
Jayme says 570 days ago
diapy..."can you throw this away?" hae asked. in this terrible time how could the most basic question come up i pondered. "yes i guess i can..." i reached my hand out. and he grabbed my arm and swung me around so my back was against his chest. he had a gun pointed at my temple also. terrified i asked
Melissa says 570 days ago
I asked "Who are you? What do you want?" He merely smiled, baring his teeth. "I want to show you something," he answered. "Something you people are too afraid to see." He grabbed my arm roughly and dragged me down the hallway...
Healthit Up For YOU says 570 days ago
which looked so unfamiliar to me, where are we I wondered? Then I reached in my pocket and found a piece of paper..
Jayme says 569 days ago
paper... ,it was a will! and it had dr. roberts name at the very end. the man dragging me down the hall saw and...
Mayaa says 569 days ago
saw and....asked"what is that?"
immediately dr.reins took the paper....and pretended to blow her nose into it:)...and was about to hand it over to the man but he only put on a disgusting look on his face and said "Ew!" and when he saw her put the paper back into her pocket he said in a disgusting tone "you got bad manners doc!!.."
immediately dr.reins took the paper....and pretended to blow her nose into it:)...and was about to hand it over to the man but he only put on a disgusting look on his face and said "Ew!" and when he saw her put the paper back into her pocket he said in a disgusting tone "you got bad manners doc!!.."
Melissa says 569 days ago
This set her off. "Bad manners?" she shouted. "You're the one who has a gun pointed at me!" The strange man glared at her and pushed her forwards with the gun. Dr. Reins knew she had to get away and figure out what was going on when a sudden explosion threw them both against the wall...
Healthit Up For YOU says 569 days ago
I woke up exhausted with a headache, and suddenly realized I was riding in the white carriage.... feeling safe, and secure I closed my eyes...
Graceyest says 569 days ago
I closed my eyes again and felt a relief.This time I had a deep sigh I said to myself when will this nightmares end? I think I was too stressed on my work.The white carriage suddenly stopped.I went ourside and saw a scenic view of the sunset.The---
Jayme says 568 days ago
the...flowers blooming from the sudden end of winter. it was sooooooooo pretty out here! when suddenly...
Jonnie Boi says 568 days ago
The man with the green cat eyes came up to me from out of the shadows. He handed me a golden ring with a sparkly diamond in the middle. "It will protect you," he said to me.
I wasn't sure if I was dreaming again. Who was Dr. Roberts and Dr. Reins? Where was that Prince? Or was all of this a dream?
"How do I know this is real?" I asked fearfully.
("Inception..." The end. lol JK. Take off with fearfully.)
I wasn't sure if I was dreaming again. Who was Dr. Roberts and Dr. Reins? Where was that Prince? Or was all of this a dream?
"How do I know this is real?" I asked fearfully.
("Inception..." The end. lol JK. Take off with fearfully.)
Melissa says 568 days ago
As soon as I asked that, I found myself sitting in a cold, white room, alone. The moon shone bright through the large picture window. I stood up and went over to it and looked out to see a dark lake. My mind was playing tricks on me, making up people like the prince and those doctors. I had no idea where I was anymore. At that moment, something appeared at the other side of the window.
Beanizer says 568 days ago
at the other side of the window..
It was a bird..with an owl head with an peacock body????? *big eyes*..i don't know if i should scream or just be amazed with the peculiar creature..then it came in front of me..and says "Arf arf arf!"..it spread it's colorful feathers..on each feather is a letter..it formed a note "Meet me under the same tree"..then the bird ran off..
I was confused..was it the prince??
It was a bird..with an owl head with an peacock body????? *big eyes*..i don't know if i should scream or just be amazed with the peculiar creature..then it came in front of me..and says "Arf arf arf!"..it spread it's colorful feathers..on each feather is a letter..it formed a note "Meet me under the same tree"..then the bird ran off..
I was confused..was it the prince??
Vijaya says 568 days ago
but it was just a dream,i wonder if it is really a charming prince and then walked through the living room thinking it was a dream....
Jolly Princess says 567 days ago
..dream haunted me for while. It was still clear in my mind. I thought maybe I was just tired. The days passed by without me seeing the world outside, is something that tormented me. I wish this is not happening. I hope my hero Peter Pan would come to take me to Neverland. Maybe… in there we will have a Whole New World…
Melissa says 567 days ago
world that I wished would come to me. But, no matter how much I wished for that to happen, it didn't come true. I was still locked up in a room, taken hostage by someone I didn't even know. As I laid down on my makeshift bed in the corner, the large, wooden door opened and my eyes widened as I saw who it was..
Jayme says 567 days ago
was... oh my gosh i thought. could this guy just leave!!!! it was the man with the green cat eyes. "Don't you have a life?!" i screamed. so i picked up the lamp beside me and threw it at him. it was one of those water lamps that was made in 2076. so when it shattered it drenched his face, which started to melt. he...
Jayme says 567 days ago
was... oh my gosh i thought. could this guy just leave!!!! it was the man with the green cat eyes. "Don't you have a life?!" i screamed. so i picked up the lamp beside me and threw it at him. it was one of those water lamps that was made in 2076. so when it shattered it drenched his face, which started to melt. he...
Sudheera says 567 days ago
he was nt a ghost.. he started screaming in pain !!! i got worried b4 i could call for help the man died !! in a hurry not to knw wat to do nd y he cme i ran from there ..suddenly someone hit my head from back.. i lost my consciousness when i woke up every thing was dark i was locked n a cabin suddenly some one was trying to come in.. tht person opened the door.........
Sudheera says 567 days ago
there was a dark black lady standing over there she nd he came near me nd said "r u alright dear? its nt safe outside " ...i got scared i saw out the window along wit her .....
Melissa says 566 days ago
There was a huge snowstorm going on out the window. I shivered at the thought of being out in that weather. The older lady took my arm and sat me down in front of the fireplace. "You should drink some tea, dear," she said, handing me the cup. "It will help you." Wanting relief from the cold, I took a sip, not seeing the strange smile on the old lady's lips..
Sudheera says 565 days ago
will b broken if nd only if i drink the water of the well of holly golden temple at south land!!!
Beanizer says 565 days ago
land...landing my slimy cold feet on the ground, i searched for the golden temple..but no golden temple was there..only silver and copper temples are standing..until an old man found me..he is too stinky that my nose felt loosen of sneezing..he held me in his hands, looked at me closer..and said, "A curse from a milk witch..tsk.tsk..you should not be drinking coffee too much you disappointed the milk witch" .."Now, you were looking for the golden temple right?"
He kept me in his wet sticky pocket. The moment I opened my bulgy eyes, a golden structure was standing in front of me..he let me in "Now do your thing..and remember! don't drink coffee w/o milk"..Then he disappeared..I haven't thank the kind stinky old man. I continued my hopping..brick to brick..until i reached the golden gate...
He kept me in his wet sticky pocket. The moment I opened my bulgy eyes, a golden structure was standing in front of me..he let me in "Now do your thing..and remember! don't drink coffee w/o milk"..Then he disappeared..I haven't thank the kind stinky old man. I continued my hopping..brick to brick..until i reached the golden gate...
A P Geofrey says 565 days ago
gate......... The gate was a big massive structure made of gold and was finely and meticulously carved that it look as if it was made by Micheal Angelo, it stood in the middle of an unending walls that streched into the sky. It had two handles in the middle and a large key hole at the bottom of it. I tried to push the door with my sticky, wetty,froggy hands but it did not move an inche and then I suddenly realised again that a I was still just a frog....
Ravali says 564 days ago
The frog seemed unusual than all the frogs as it got a horn on its head which surprised me the most.i walked towards the frog and it spoke to me....
Melissa says 564 days ago
"You are searching for something nobody else can find," it said in a surprisingly clear voice. I asked it how I was supposed to find it when I was in the form of a frog. I felt hopeless. The frog in front of me shook his head slowly and said, "You've never realized the power you have." Before I could ask him what he meant, a large boom sounded in the distance over the mountains..
The Father Abraham says 564 days ago
...The prophet appear in the distance. He was the one talking through the frog, actually, through all animals in the kingdom. Either he was a good prophet or an actor searching for some fortune...
Healthit Up For YOU says 563 days ago
This was not making any sense to me, and I was very tired so I decided to go to sleep, and suddenly I awoke to a beautiful sound. When I opened my eyes there he was my Prince Charming! In disbelief I said, "It's you?" I could not believe my eyes because the last time I saw him I was in the carriage watching him kiss another maiden! As if he heard my thoughts he said, "Be careful you have been resting for a while and the bump on your head is still healing, my sister and I found you and brought you to the palace to take care of you". I could not express my thankfulness enough I told him. He said, " You may stay with me for the rest of your, I mean, our lives.....
Theeny says 555 days ago
our lives." I gave him my biggest brightest smile and watched him getting up and leaving the room. I looked around and I noticed that the walls were made of mirrors...not only the walls, but also the furniture, the lampshades, the curtains, the floor, everything out of mirrors! I marvelled all the countless tiny reflections of my own face until I noticed that one was radically different. It wasn't my own...
Crazy Clique says 555 days ago
seeing my own reflection i searched for the image of my prince charming but what i saw was just me.. i felt like he was whispering to my ears, i would rub my eyes to make myself realize that i was surrounded by my many but still alone..
Mehdi Qazi says 454 days ago
....alone it seemed that i m in a very desolate place.. My heart wanted to feel free, my ears wanted to listen whispers of the air....
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Healthit Up For YOU says 264 days ago
and suddenly I from a distance I saw what appeared to be a person coming towards me...
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