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Jayme says 530 days ago

can you give me a thumbs up or a thumbs down on whether or not you would read this if you saw it in stores??? its a blurb...

Moving to a new school for the first time ever can be hard,but how would you feel moving to a supernatural school where your the only human? Lunas an average, teenage american girl whose whole world getts turned upside down when she starts at St. Thomas High. Not only is the school full of supernaturals,but they are on the verge of war. As Luna struggles with her diagnosed Agoraphobia and getting used to being the only human,besides her mom who is still in mourning of Lunas father,she is slowely taking interest in Milo and Declan. Milo being sweet,protective,and what alot would say a 'perfect guy', but is it all an act? Or Declan, a bad boy with a truely kind nature? or maybe he follows in his father's foot steps? Each running an oppisite side of the war. The fate of the world lies on Luna's decision.
Follow Luna's tale as she meets new people,conquers her fears, and falls in love with not one, but two guys who will win your heart........what would you do?

User Replies (16)

Odliam says 530 days ago

I reckon you have a good argument here! In the path of "Harry Potter" if you develop all the potential!

It can be a very good, interesting story.

Clean it, give it a good push and I am sure you will get ahead with it!

Jayme says 530 days ago

lol thanks :) im hand writing as of now...and i have 31 pages lolzz but its going somewhere... :)

Odliam says 530 days ago

Nice, girl!

Go ahead, you got the path... follow it! that's how great writers are born!

Never loose faith in your talent!

UNACTIVE says 530 days ago

This sounds like something I would totally read. Thumbs UP for the very interesting plot. Hope you get to publish this soon! ^ ^

Jayme says 530 days ago

Thanks :D

Karen says 521 days ago

Very interesting. Would like to read more.

JewelValley says 521 days ago

hmmmmmmmmmmm

Jayme says 520 days ago

Is hmmmmmmmmmm good or bad?

Sabita says 520 days ago

oh amy!!!!

Jayme says 520 days ago

Yes sabi?

Sabita says 520 days ago

good to see you....

Jayme says 520 days ago

Lol you too!

Balqis says 520 days ago

Thumbs up! I'd stop and read. At such a young age, you could write so well. Keep it going! :)

Nepsy says 520 days ago

Just fall in love and dont care the rest.......

Jayme says 520 days ago

Lol...your not supposed to answer the last question its part of the blurb tehe

Nepsy says 520 days ago

:)..Oops !

What would you say?